Fiction that Departs from Society's Norms and Values
71Should fiction preach to us? Should it establish certain values as desirable? Or should it simply dramatize conflicts that involve values and allow the reader to use his critical faculties to choose a side?
I've always opted for the last choice in my own writing, and I think I'm rather good at that, except for one thing: my values and those of society clash, and sometimes readers get confused, because it does not occur to them that anyone could disagree with their basic values. They then find it extremely irksome when the people who do "bad things" come off as sympathetic. Instead of saying to themselves: "I disagree with the values of this author," a lot of readers, including critics and editors, arrive at a different conclusion: "This is badly written."
When we turn to authorities on "how to write", it is hard to escape their ingrained assumption that we all know what "good" and "bad" traits are, and all we have to do in order to understand a novel is to identify good traits as character strengths and bad traits as character weaknesses.
Watch the instructional video below, in which author K.M. Weiland discusses virtues and vices in George Eliot's Mill on the Floss. What do we learn about K.M. Weiland's values concerning fiscal policy from her literary advice?
What are Unlikeable Traits? Do we all agree on that?
Forgive Us Our Debts as We Forgive Our Debtors: Gifts in Fraud of Creditors
Forgiving a debt against a relative while teetering on the brink of bankruptcy oneself is counted as a virtue in K.M. Weiland's eyes, as well as in George Eliot's book. Now, what was that called again when I was back in law school? A gift in fraud of creditors. Is this a good thing to do in my book? No. In my novels, short stories and plays, this would be counted as a flaw or a vice.
But how do we engage in literary analysis of any fictional work, without taking sides on values? Is that even possible?
I remember vaguely that I did try to read The Mill on the Floss once, very long ago, when I was a teenager. I don't remember anything about it, except that it was very soppy. It felt like wading though treacle. Did I make a connection between not enjoying George Eliot's writing and not sharing her values? I'm not sure that I did. But I do remember reading Atlas Shrugged around the same time, and that book has left a lasting impression.
Negative and Positive: In a Value Neutral Universe, it's the contrast that matters
Self-Abnegation: Is it a good thing?
In George Eliot's universe, self-abnegation is a good thing, a mark of virtue. In Ayn Rand's world, it is a character flaw. Maggie Tulliver is virtuous, because she gives up on happiness for the sake of others. Hank Rearden is tragically flawed, because he allows others to prey on him. Can we, as readers and critics, possibly react to these characters and the dilemmas they face in a value-neutral way?
Some say that it is the nuances, the grey areas, that distinguish a great work from one that is too idealogically programmatic.Weiland praises Eliot, because she allows characters to have both virtues and flaws, thereby creating a rich grey area. People say that with Ayn Rand, everything is black and white. But is that really true? And besides, how can we possibly even experience grey, if we've shut our eyes to black and white? Don't black and white define grey?
The Birth of Liberal Guilt
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Politics and Literature
Quick, name a classic novel from the nineteenth century that espouses fiscally or socially conservative values! I can't think of one. Can you?
How about the eighteenth century? The seventeenth? Okay, think back as far as you remember into the history of literature, and when has a book exhorting people to pay back their debts made it to the bestseller list?
Not even the Bible, if you count the OT and NT, together, does that. After all, where do you think Eliot, liberal free thinker that she was, got the idea that forgiving our debtors while hoping for forgiveness from our creditors, is a decent way to behave? It came straight from the "Good Book" and it leads inexorably toward socialism.
Rand herself was not entirely immune to this kind of thinking. She had Howard Roark default on his rent payment rather than compromise his architectural designs in The Fountainhead. When we are immersed in a particular culture, it is easy to adopt its values even as we struggle against them. I'm sure Rand didn't mean to take a stand against the "evils of landlordism" when she wrote that passage. She just wasn't focusing.
Even as we try to paint a character with good and bad traits, we are often trapped in the cultural context of what is considered good and bad by our contemporaries. So then is it completely impossible for a literary work to espouse values that fly in the face of the social norm? Not necessarily, as long as the social norm is a really outdated one.
For instance, Samuel Shellabarger's Captain from Castile is very good at dramatizing the inner conflict of Pedro de Vargas as he comes to realize that the Inquisition is bad. But the only reason that Shellabarger managed to get away with that is that by the time he wrote the book, everybody had already realized that the Inquisition was bad, and there was no more Inquisition.
How much moral courage does it take to make a stand against the Inquisition in the twentieth century? How much imagination does it require of the reader to follow the protagonist's inner struggle? Isn't the outcome already obvious from the start?
Javert: Which are his virtues and which are his flaws?
A Value Neutral Painting of a Flawed Character
However, there is still hope. It is possible to create flawed characters that people from different ideological backgrounds can love. Look at Javert. He's a beautiful example of a flawed character that everybody can find something to like about. Some of us love him for his relentless pursuit of justice. Some love to hate him for his narrow mindedness.
In future works, I am hoping to use this kind of grey area to make readers of different political persuasions enjoy my characters. For instance, consider this tragically flawed individual: an American patriot who contributes large sums of money to Marx and Engels in order to fund their ideological movement, because he believes that they are opposed to the tariff, just like him!
Liberals can love him because he contributed to Marx and Engels. Conservatives can appreciate the tragedy of his not being able to wade through Das Kapital long enough to figure out they are opposed to property rights. So there'll be something in there for everyone!
Now I'd like to see a short instructional video by K.M. Weiland exploring that kind of literary device!
© 2011 Aya Katz
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Thanks for the hub, much enjoyed it. Love "Atlas Shrugged", not so up to date on some of the others though, now I suppose I can be. Credit is based on TRUST, forgiveness of debt may devalue that trust some but I believe can improve the relationship in the future. It is amazing what can come of the 'grey areas', without them I think the reading is a little less enjoyable no matter the topic, the reader should always have that grey area to intrigue their imagination and thoughts of their own. thanks again.
Interesting hub. I agree that serious fiction should pose the question and let the reader find his or her own answer. I find serious literature and movies much more accessible than the Bible for raising moral issues. Examples: Glengarry Glen Ross, Kramer vs. Kramer, Sophie's Choice, Death of a Salesman, The Iceman Commeth, Doubt, The Savages and many others. I don't include anything by Ayn Rand. Hers are cardboard characters spouting her so-called objectivist philosophy.
Well, I took several literature and philosophy courses at a good university and I never heard Ayn Rand's name or objectivism mentioned. And I'm re-reading "The Fountainhead" fifty years after reading it the first time, and the characters appear to be caricatures of people she admired and others she hated. I admit I've been influenced by diaparaging articles I've read about her from time to time. I did read "Atlas Shrugged" when it came out. Also, I've read a lot of highly regarded books which I'm able to compare with Rand. Her characters are quite flat compared to the ones in so many good books from, e.g,, Proust, Dostoyevsky, Twain, Melville, Hemmingway, Updike, et al.
I was not "turned off" by Howard Roark's values. He is an admirable but not a very realistic character. Rand's objectivism is basically stolen from the discredited social Darwinism of Herbert Spencer and his followers which departs from our Judaeo-Christian heritage. So, you are correct that I am repelled by Rand's philosophy even more than by her novels which are mediocre at best.
People think many liberals like Marx and Engels, but I never liked either one. I preferred Native American ideas about socialism because I am part Kansa Indian, and I am more inspired by liberals from our American progressive era in the 1890's-1910's. I am more of New World liberal so to speak.
I am going to read Atlas Shrugged one of these days. I am reading a bit of everything. I even read the Twilight series, which was just creepy on so many levels. Cannot believe people romanticize being bit by a vampire. A lot of creepy elements in that novel.
You know I am going to read it, and I do not agree with everything I read. I read books such as Reading Lolita in Tehran, and whereas I could not figure out why the young Iranian woman moved back to Iran to become a professor, I still enjoyed reading a story from her point of view. Eventually she realized living there was not the future she wanted for her children, and moved back to the US. It is definitely an interesting read though regarding how women in restrictive societies still gather around to discuss books.
I discovered this hub as I was preparing to write my review of your book. The topic of clashing values here somewhat mirrors my concerns about the book being controversial (for lack of a better word) for children and many parents. I appreciate your point of view about writing values neutral fiction for adults. And I'm so relieved that you liked my review and see my point that it's different when writing for children. We cant expect them to be critical thinkers. And we know that parents want to instill their own values and beliefs in their children.
I will try to do the Amazon review when I have time, probably on the weekend. Good luck with your book sales.
Bottom line the issue is the interest of the individual versus the interest of the community. This is a perennial battle on a number of issues: for example, can the community require vaccinations against a disease in the interest of preventing an epidemic versus the individual who for his own reasons doesn't want to be vaccinated or to have his child vaccinated; restrictions on use of land for various reasons versus the right of the owner to use his property as he sees fit; the requirement by the government to pay taxes versus the individual's right to pay taxes for programs he doesn't support. Long ago most, but not all, of these issues were resolved in ways which require individuals to contribute in various ways to the common good. Although Ann Rand and Aya Katz put the individual first most people are more communitarian.
Did you see the new comment on my review of Ping? A friend of mine read the book and had some comments I think you would appreciate. If you could give me access to your book When Sword Met Bo, I will review it for you on Hubpages.















Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago
Any writing that I do is a discovery process that I hope will be identified with.;)